[영어공부](MIT Tech Review Vol.2-4) Your first lab-grown burger is coming soon-and it'll be "blended"
<My Review>
Hello, this is Shwan Choi speaking. I heard about cultimated meat -which is so called lab-grown meat. I think it is good news for vegitarians because vegitarians have problem when they encounter social meetings. I think the industry will be emerging industry in like 10 years. I should consider about inversting into the artificial meat industry. It will be worth it.
Today, I read the whole article, but I am drunk right now when I am writing this review. So, I gotta say goodby today. I will be more sincere with my next review.
Actually, I am doing this article review study with my collagues whom is Mr.Yu Seong Ho(유성호), Mr.Baek Jung Hoon(백정훈), Mr.Kang Seong Jin(강성진), Mr.Cha Jae Hoon(차재훈). Thanks for them, I can post my article review and it helps me in every way. I hope they can reach all thier own dreams, so as I. We will be leading persons in any way. I hope their successful futere and we will be helping each other whenever someone of those is struglging. I love you guys bros~!
<ChatGPT 첨삭>
Hello, this is Shwan Choi speaking. I heard about cultimated meat -which is so called → cultivated meat—also known as lab-grown meat. I think it is good news for vegitarians → vegetarians, because vegitarians have problem when they encounter social meetings → they often face difficulties in social gatherings. I think the industry will be emerging industry in like 10 years → a rapidly growing one within the next 10 years. I should consider about inversting into → consider investing in the artificial meat industry. It will be worth it.
Today, I read the whole article, but I am drunk right now when I am writing → as I’m writing this review. So, I gotta say goodby → goodbye today. I will be more sincere with my next review → in my next review.
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Actually, I am doing this article review study with my collagues whom is → colleagues, who are Mr. Yu Seong Ho (유성호), Mr. Baek Jung Hoon (백정훈), Mr. Kang Seong Jin (강성진), and Mr. Cha Jae Hoon (차재훈). Thanks for them, I can post my article review and it helps me in every way. → Thanks to them, I’m able to keep up with writing these article reviews, and it’s helping me a lot. I hope they can reach all thier own dreams, so as I. → all of their dreams—and so can I. We will be leading persons in any way → leaders in our own ways. I hope for their successful futere → successful futures, and I know we’ll keep supporting each other whenever someone of those is struglging → one of us is struggling.
I love you guys, bros~!
<ChatGPT 평가>
끝! 조금은 게을렀던 하루..
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